Childhood Book: The Giving Tree. By: Shel Silverstein
The opening line of this story is: Once there was a tree...and she loved a little boy.
Once there was a tree…and she loved a little boy. The little tree lived deep in the forest near a little village where the boy lived. Unlike the other little trees, she secretly loved a human and often did childish things to get the little boy’s attention. The tree loved the little boy’s gray eyes and the way the little boy’s light blond hair always seems to be messy and covered in mud. She loved how the little boy was always happy and smiling whenever he found something interesting to play with whenever he looks around the forest floor. The little tree wished she could be with the little boy and play with him because he was always enjoying himself. But all the little tree could do was rustle her leafs when the boy was in the other direction or when the boy was close she would drop a couple of her leafs on top of the boy. She would watch the little boy brush the leaf away and stare at her for a couple of minutes and smile. But the days after that the little boy stopped turning towards her direction and no matter what the little tree did, the boy did not look. She continued her efforts year after year until one day the boy stopped coming. The tree wanted to get up from her spot and find the little boy but she was rooted to the ground and instead she prayed that the boy would come back or let her become a human to find the little boy. The boy never came back and years went by without a single trace of him. The tree stopped praying. It was the usual year for the tree, Fall would come and change the color of her leafs, Winter was always mean to her and take away all her leafs, while Spring would encourage and mend her leafs. The tree was no longer the hopeful and playful tree she once was and stood in the hot summer sun thinking about rain. While thinking, the tree did not notice that a human had taken shelter in her shades. She was startled when something had leaned against her trunk and surprised to find that it was a human sleeping on her trunk. The tree did not know what to do. Should she wait for the human to wake up or do something to wake the human. She stood there contemplating which choice she should choose and decided to just leave the human alone. She just wanted to observe the human because she knew that she would not see another human ever again and if the human woke up, she would be alone again. It was when the sun was red, in the sky, when the human had awakened from his slumber and was preparing to leave. She saw for the first time the color of the human's eyes. Gray eyes, the tree thought. She looked at the boy's hair and it was a more defined dark blond color and a bit more cleaned compare to the little boy years ago.
'It's him' the tree thought.
She was not excited but she was not disappointed either...she was just shocked. She felt like she should be happy but at the same time she was a little angry. After so many years the boy had changed in appearance and she was not able to see the change throughout those years. Her thought was interrupted when the human searched the items he brought along with him and pulled out a small bell and hung it by the little branches above his head.
“I’ll come back tomorrow.” The human said leaving the tree behind
The tree was not sure if the human would really come the next day or he meant a couple more years until he returns. The tree fell asleep and decided to wait for the next day. The human did come as promised and he brought a little creature with him. The tree was happy to see the human but she was curious what and who his companion was since it was following him around.
“Buster, this is the tree that I told you about, don’t you think she pretty?”
His little companion gave a loud response to the human’s words and the tree was startled by the noise. Why was the little creature responding so loudly to the human’s words. The human turned towards the tree and introduced the creature to her.
“Hey, this is my dog, Buster, he is my special friend and I wanted to show you to him.”
She watched as the dog walked around her trunk and circled around on one part of the ground and slept. The human laughed calling the dog a silly creature. The human went over to Buster and kissed the dog on the head. He looked up at the tree and smiled. He whispered something to her. She did not hear what he said and wished she could talk to tell him to repeat it again but she had no mouth and was kept silent. The human woke the little creature and hung another bell onto one of her smaller branches. Then the human left the tree again. After that it seemed that every day was the same routine to the human and the tree. He would come back to her bringing along his little companion or sometimes without him but always leaving a small bell on one of her branches without fail. She was content with the presence of the human. She looked forward to every day and grew to love the human once again. The tree wanted to show the human that she loved him but she could not and it frustrated her. She could only watch as the human smiled at her and visit her. The summer was over and even though she could not tell the human she loved him, she was happy that things were the same way it used to be.
1. How does the new story compare to the original story? Keep in mind they are supposed to be totally different storylines but can include the characters.
ReplyDeleteI like how the story is similarly comparable to the original story. It’s a basic love story that portrays nature and human together. Very beautiful and well written and it also strays away from the original story of the book “The Giving Tree.”
2. How are the characters developed in the story?
The characters do show development and follow the laws of nature. Seasons do change and trees are unable to change what happens to the seasonal reactions. As love comes to people, it also leaves because nothing stays forever. Eventually the tree will outlive the boy and then she will be lonely for the rest of her life. Memories will be the only thing she has left.
3. Does the plot of the story contain all the important parts: Introduction, Rising Actions, Climax, Falling Actions, Resolution?
Yes the story does contain all the essential parts of a good story. It introduces the love of the story and the boy, it gives the rising action about the boy leaving for many years, climax with the boy returning to the tree and thereafter forever being with the tree until he dies.
4. How does the ending satisfy you, the reader?
The ending was acceptable for a love story between a tree and man. It truly portrays man’s love for nature and how we should accept nature every day in our lives. Good story and well written for a child’s story.
5. What is one thing that really stuck out to you in the story and why?
There wasn’t much that stuck out to me in the story. I read the book and looked at it from the view of love and nature. To me, Transcendentalists would really critic this story in a positive way because of how the boy connects with nature and idealizes it.
1. How does the new story compare to the original story? Keep in mind they are supposed to be totally different storylines but can include the characters.- I thought the beginning of the story related a lot to the original story. How the kid and the tree had a relationship with the tree. I haven’t read the story but they seem to be kind of similar, except for the end where the boy grew up and still went back to visit but instead brought his dog.
ReplyDelete2. How are the characters developed in the story?- The child was brought up early on. I like that you only had one character and I believe that is how the original story is as well. Towards the end you added his dog which was nice add to the story. Hearing him experience the tree with his dog was a different perspective.
3. Does the plot of the story contain all the important parts: Introduction, Rising Actions, Climax, Falling Actions, Resolution?- Yes the story does have all three part and you added them all very well. Good Job. I thought your story was very sweet and interesting.
4. How does the ending satisfy you, the reader? It satisfies me because the story doesn’t just leave me hanging, it actually ended and didn’t leave me wondering what was going to happen next. You explained the story very well.
5. What is one thing that really stuck out to you in the story and why?- One thing that really stuck out was the bells, putting the bells on the tree was s something I didn’t quite understand at first. I then reread it and found it a kind gesture of the man.
Overall I really enjoyed your story!
1. This relates to the originalstory because the human and the tree fall in love with each other but they dont have a dog in the original I think. So that makes it better than the original. this also contains traces of yourself in this and what you hope may happen.
ReplyDelete2. In this story the characters are developed very well. The human in the beginning is not described as well but that is great because he wasnt as important until way later. Also the trees longing for the human made his reappearance thatmore appealing.
3. The story contains a rich introduction about the tree and its love for a human. the rising action is when the tree is waiting for his return to her. The climax when he returned was kind of like a dream to the tree. the falling action is when he continues to visit her everyday. and the resolution when she is so happy to have things like they were in the beginning.
4. This story satifies me the reader because in life you leave somethings you love behind and they may return later in life. Also Michelle this story is appealing because of the characters traits where they are linked to each other even though one cannot even talk.
5. The thing that really stuck out to me was the bells that he kept hanging on her.